Wonderfully written!

Mustang was my favorite character, but it was worth it just to see a good tragedy. You're a very talented author, good work.

this is very good, but the grammer could use some work. a little more detail would help as well but overall a good story... im a fan of the murder/suicide stories as well.

Wow...depressing, deep...the image that I had during the last paragraph was HILARIOUS!