Great Story!

Luna Hinomura,
I must say, I would rather have been able to write using an email-feature than this review system, but it's just a minor inconveience. Moving onward, I will say that this story, along with "A Brief Taste of Eternity" by Thomas '009' Doscher, are truly, my favorite fics. One of the reasons I feel this way is that that out of all the pairings you could devise, the Tsunami-Tenchi pair is my favorite. I am also a fan of OMG and your seamless blending of the two shows took your fic and hoisted it high above the crude and narrow definitions of a crossover fanfic.
I wish to strongly implore you to keep writing. I know you've begun the second book but there hasn't seemed to be that many updates. I am very curious to see how this all will end. Please reply if you have the chance. My best regards and heartfelt encouragements...

I like the series and hope that Book II come out soon.

Thanks, that sounds good. And to everyone else, I actually have the entire Book II in my head but am quite burned out on writing it. In fact, Book III would have delved into the Ah! My Goddess world with Tenchi attending Nekomi Tech, but... I just can't write anymore (and why would Tenchi even attend an "MIT" type of school anyway?).

Why don't you call chapter 16: Dejected Princess

A good story but rises the question of where in Sam hill is chapter 8?

I do like this story, but;

If you are going to use the Ah, My Goddess premise, you should include some of their characters. See Bobr's story, "Conversations" and you can see how he does use them well enough to help a Tenchi Story. Just my ramblings, take them for constructive Critizism. Maybe have the group take Bobr's idea of Parallel universes, and then intro. the OMG Cast and have fun with their interactions with these Demons, angels, and Goddesses.

This story's great but there is one problem... chapter 8's missing, chapter nine there instead.

This fic is pretty good. To make it better, bring out more chapters.

Wery good, i really liked this series.

It is a welcome surprise that you are comtinuing with this series. I thought it was done with after chapter 12 but am glad that I was wrong. Come out with the next chapters soon!