I keep forgetting to review so I have nothing constructive to say other than I really, really love this. It's dark and gritty and different. I so want to see this story through until the end.

This is definitely a favorite of mine!

wow.. this story did really get my interes! cant wait for the next chapter

Let me just say, you're off to a pretty good start; the first chapter got me interested, for one. In fact, the end actually made me laugh.
The little poem before the story started was nice as well and I liked the fact that the words rhymed, which I find hard to accomplish sometimes.
The only problem I found was your constant use of periods. You have a lot of periods after a word near the beginning, which was unnecessary most of the time. Instead of dots, you could have used commas or semi-colons to join a sentence or perhaps just use a single period to end a single sentence.
I'm not flaming or insulting your story in any way; I, once again, found it interesting from the start. That's the only problem I found so far. C:
I wish you the best of luck and most of all, update. Lol.

bout time you updated this is very interesting ive never read a ichiruki drug story so im sure this will be enjoyable

I love this story. I really do. My uncle was a heroine addict and this story almost brought me to tears at the end of this chapter. Please continue it.

Update soon!

:)

excellent chapter, loved it. Good job in Ichigo's emotional breakdown while keeping him in character at the same time. You seem very good in getting into character as your writing to make it hit harder to home as the plot plays out. At first I thought the spot where Rukia picked was where Ichigo was first introduced to heroin but then I remembered it was at the park not the riverbank. I'm curious about why Ichigo took out the gun too. I hope I find out soon. When you said "Chase the Dragon" honest to god i thought of South Park when they were spoofing Guitar Hero and Stan needed to melow out so the video game clerk gave him "Heroin Hero" and the hole point is to chase a dragon which you can never achieve. Well keep up the good work and I hope you read mine soon so I know what to work on and what to do better and so on. I'm going to stop rambling and leave it at that, you did a great job and I hope for more. Peace out
-Kori

Oh wow this was very educational lol! I now know more about drugs than I ever thought I would know XD. I had totally forgotten about this story and this is the first Bleach fanfic I have read in a long time, made me remember how much I love fanfic's so thanks for the reminder...maybe I will start reading all the stories I have emailed to me again. Update soon!

I'm really glad to see an update. This story has a lot of potential, specially if you continue down a trail that you hinted at, where Rukia 'allows' Ichigo a reprieve from his addiction.

Keep up the good work, looking forward to the next chapter.

This is really good.

So im on like page 16 or something.


YOU NEED TO UPDATE THIS! I love the whole drug addict thing. <3

This is good i like it so far. I've been having thoughts recently of having a story like this. I'd say keep it the rating for now and see if it starts to get more..."descriptive" AKA if it starts to go more into using the drugs and suicidal thoughts etc. I've pretty much made my decision of writing my own fic similar after reading this thanks for giving me the feeling to see how it goes. Hope all goes well and you continue
-Kori.

damn right now im working on a fic thats like this

This seems like this could be a really good story!
although i don't sit well with angst it's very interesting to me!
you probably should make it M , i know i might burst into tears...lol maybe, im very sensitive.
please update soon!

the idea is really good. i think this fic is very promising and has great potential once you get going. i think this first chapters not bad at all even though you said it was terribly written.