Very nice characterisation. I felt just like an episode. Easy dialogue, and above all else, very believable.

Good job!

Ah, I love Mark and Lexie. And smut. I love smut too. Thanks for writing!

That was great! Very well-written! From the beginning to the end you could feel the heat and the passion and the love between them! In a nutshell, you managed to give perfectly the core of the story: that it was more than just sex.

All I can say is wow. Truly, your writing is amazing. The way you capture the characters is so exact and I enjoy reading your stories. It never strays from the established characters we already know and love. I also like how the smut isn't to detailed or trashy-it works and Mark is such the romatic!! I loved how he told her just at the right time. Great job.

Brilliant! Loved this (:

Fabulous! I would love to see this transpire on the show ... ALL OF IT!! :-D

Whew...well this is surely different from your last two fics..and truth be told I am feeling a bit flushed. lol Anyway it was amazing as always and I shall be sure to read it again later on with Drew. ;P Awesome job Caitline!!
Haydee

I hope something like this happens on the show. Thanks for another fic! I wonder what else you will come up with. :D

Perfect. And this is actually completely random, but what exactly did Mark succeed at?

Romantic, funny, smart, sweet, sexy, the I love yous were awesome, thank you for sharing your lovelies, :)

SIMPLY AMAZING!! I just love your fanfics!! Excellent!!

OMG. OMG. OMG. OMG.
I don't know what else to say.
I'm so glad you wrote this.
I freaking love it.

wot i'm the first one to review. well i think so LOL.
i love love love but freaky love it. that was amazing and well written. i mean the i love you part, the you're utterly beautiful part too *squee* *thud*
that was so gorgeous. i mean everything. i wish this could happen on the show.