WOW. That's the first thing that came to mind when I finished reading this story. This story has VERY good grammar and a VERY VERY good plot . You have done something incredibly rare- you have captured Rosalie's pain perfectly. This is by far the most AMAZING story I've read. I swear i could feel Rosalie's pain practically dripping off of every word. I- you just left me speechless for a long time. You should think about writing another chapter about when Rosalie finally comes out of the bathroom or maybe one from Emmett' s point of view.

- SeptemberSapphire

more plz

poor Rose

I like this, for some reason i love to here that rosalie suffers and to here that she's so misareble the cullen's would not be without her. but i feel for her sometimes. but the more missareble someone is around bella it makes isabela look more powerfull. because the rosalie hale is jelouse of issabell mason. it makes edward looks good too.

This is AMAZING!

The writing is smooth and the idea is great.

This is awesome. Wonderful Job.

Keep of the fantastic work!

Ouch. I love your portrayal of Rosalie. She's not just empty-headed and evil before Breaking Dawn, and you can't tell me having a niece magically solved all of her problems. Great job.

Wow! I honestly thought this was a really good one-shot )

I thought you showed Rosalie's perspective and POV quite well, and that is was very well written.

great job! :)

Alexandra

yikes .

this is a very different side of rosalie but very much appreciated !

:)

Again, wow. Great descriptions in this one- especially with the light on the doll's eyes at the end. I really enjoyed the depths you gave Rosalie in this oneshot, not just expanding on what we already knew from canon, but also introducing new aspects of her life and family. This was very, very sad, but just as well done.

KrisEleven

Oh, gosh. That was so beautiful!

Heart breakingly beautiful

:o

that was awesome/

Oh, best Rose fic I've ever read. Brilliant.

wow. i'm actully crying now! your such a great writer! i loved it! thank you

That was so sad! so wonderful. It was fantastic!