i really like how this is going... update soon!

excellent, please update soon

Hey, this is a very good story. Please keep up the great work.

the last bit is AWESOME!!

Rodney's proposal is done well. He proposes and somehow pulls a muscle. Onlt McKay can have something like that happen to him.

I did like the choice Ronon gave to McKay. Porpose to Keller, or face him in combat. Rodney made the choice that allowed him to live long enough to see his child.

Now Rodney and Jennifer turns to Jeannie for help. This doesn't seem good.

I also like the banter between Rodney and Jeannie. Althought the banter between McKay and Sheppard is better.

A very nice chapter. Rodney's proposal was spot on. Just the way I think he would do it. Nice to see Jeannie as well.

nice
More please soon!

This was a great chapter. I think you captured everyone really well, especially Jeannie and Rodney's relationship.

Please keep it coming.

DW

I'm laughing my ass off.
Great! More please!

Just the story I was expecting... not too much, not too little... the characters have been respected and it's quite funny ! Your fan fiction is the best I've read yet. Keep going.

McKeller = technobabble = win!

Figures that Rodney would faint when he found out that Keller was pregnant. Getting the concussion was just an added bonus.

I wonder how McKay would make of the situation, if he doesn't kill himself before making a proper decision.

I was right! Rodney DID get a major shock! Now, he needs to figure out just what he wants to do about this situation.

Sounds like Rodney is going to be in for a MAJOR surprise if and when he finds out!

Cute chapter, can't wait to see more Rodney and Jen interaction. Keep up the great work and update soon!