Dam fine story keep up the good work thanks and bye,

Great Update Keep Up the Good Work!

Good job on the new chapter, I hope you'll add more to this soon.

Lots of quotation marks seem to have gone missing in this one. Otherwise, good chapter, thanks for sharing it with us.

You have to spellcheck your storry better. For instance, itis Horcrux not Horux. Otherwise if you clean up your grammar, then this could be a good story.

Sounds like the team has done some good, but now has to deal with a problem that can't be handled with bombs. As for Angel, I would keep him cold and merciless. Hints of the old Angelus playing with food and torturing people, just enough to keep those he is dealing with on their toes.

Very interesting job on the story so far, please do your best to add more when you can

-Any pairings in this fic?

Nice chapter, thanks for sharing it with us.

Basicaly very good and more importantly enjoyable. You need more dialog and a bit less introspective action.

First sentence of chapter 5:

Currently: The six heroes awoke that day uncomfortably today was the day of the mass funeral for all of those that had died thanks to them and Ethan.

Suggestion:
The six heroes awoke uncomfortably aware, today was the day of the mass funeral for all who had died halloween, and who they and Ethan had been resposible.

Found a couple of bad spots Chapter 5 second paragraph last line of paragraph

Currently: No the farther that he allowed that group of bottom feeding sharks were the better off he would be.

Suggestion :
No the farther that he kept that group of bottom feeding sharks away the better off he would be.

Hope this helps

Very interesting story, certainly a different take on the Halloween theme.

Things should really get interesting once they get set up in England. I wonder how long it will take Volde to realise that someone is actively working against him for a change.

Well done and thanks for sharing.

I like the story, but other than that I don't have much to say on this chapter. Seemed like a setup chapter to me.

Nice work, though I am dying to get to the killing.

Good chapter, now I hope the story really picks up the pace. Eagerly wating for the next update.

Well, the gang has finished off Sunnydale. Not, its time to take on old Moldy Butt and his gang before the Mayor Ascends! Also, is Faith going to show up in Sunnydale with B and the gang gone?

I enjoyed reading your story. I liked the way you had Buffy, Willow, & Xander tell everyone off. Please update soon.