Intriguing premise even though I'm not exactly sure as to what it is, yet. Solid writing as usual. Lovely earlier KakaSaku works, I hadn't reviewed them, wanting to first read all of your fics to compare. Your writing in By the Book is exceptionally fluid and sexy, of course! I found Paradigm Shift to be very well executed with your attention to details about her childhood, and memorable lines like the "isosceles triangle" of her family. Not to mention unique.

"Sonnet" has great potential, and I see it's been a year since you've last updated. I'm eager for your next installment here, but I do understand the sad yet inevitable intrusion of RL. So if you have time, please continue writing! Thanks for posting up all your fic on FF!

:)

Please do not abandon this fic, and update soon!

Thanx

Thank you for this lovely piece of work. It's nice to find the occasional story that actually has substance and engages the reader with more than the possibility of smut. (Don't get me wrong, I'm a fan of smut, but I love an intriguing plot even more.) I hope to see more updates to this tale! Thank you again!

Again portia ... absolutely wonderful

no wonder I felt so intimidated to post anything -.-'

You really should give yourself more credit

I am in total love with this story already

-Denilmo

loved this story to death. the immense detail and depiction of emotion is amazing. I can't wait for the next installment.

This story is pretty amazing so far. I look forward to seeing what you have in store, especially since I am an avid fan of this pairing.

AD

Dropping us right into the action is quite the devious way to make the reader interested. Can't wait to see what happens next!

This is fascinating. Unlike anything else KakaSaku I've read. I'm inexplicably drawn in and hooked on this. I'll definitely be along for the ride.

This is a beautifuly writen story. You have quite a talent :)

I hope you update soon!

I've read the two chapters that you've posted so far. Excellently written. I look forward to what you have planned.

The first chapter was lovely, and painfully true to those of us who've moved from protected child to careful guardian of our parents' last days. The second chapter unveils an intriguing mystery, with suspense skillfully intertwined with hints of emotion and descriptions that put the reader fully into the story. Wonderfully written, I eagerly look forward to more.

Obviously, very beautifully written. Such wonderful detail too. I look forward to the next one.

Rox

Wow. I loved it. I hurt for Sakura's wounds. Is this a mission? Your Kakashi is simply lovely, so concerned, yet still trying to detach himself from her. Hahaha, poor guy is fighting a lost battle. ;)

Lovely installment, honey! I'm definitely looking forward to more!

Wow, this is incredible.

Hey Portia,

WOW! update no jutsu! I am SO happy you have decided to post another luscious chapter of this masterpiece.

-Now I am not particularly good at discussing literature in an educated manner, so I won't even try, I'll just say this: When I read I normally have the TV on or perhaps some prog-rock-hardcore blaring out in the background, because I can generally read any time, anywhere...but with this baby I had to even take the batteries out my wall-clock so that I could absorb every word in complete silence. It's so beautiful!

As for the plot? well gosh I'm intrigued! and you have also (once again) taught me something new: Pygmalion - great word, Wikepedia is telling me all about it!

Looking forward to an update!

Slink. x