This was an amazing chapter.
Can't wait till the next. :D

this is really really good keep writing!

Finally!! But what will happen in the morning? Something good, right? Update soon :D

ah.
I loved it.
It was really good.
Especially with the details.

Great Job...

Awh, sweet chapter. I don't wont Ulric or Ava to become heart broken! Dammit, there just so too cute together. :D

this is so awesome, you are an exellent writer adn this story is very intresting...Keep updating!

Awesome. Keep it up, :D

aww that's so sad. but it's going to make it when they get to get all the better. i cant wait to read the next chapter!!

this was an awesome chapter it was well written and descriptive!
i almost cried cuz well i imagined it perfectly...
i am frustrated though i just wisah they share their love but i guess its not that easy please update soon

I liked it a lot. I mean, haha, I am not happy about the whole Ulric, Ava situation but I love your writing. Great chapter, Please update soon! :D

No, stupid Madelia! Loved the chapter, update soon :D

Its good, very engaging. I* hope you wish to continue it for it is a great story. Ava and Ulric get together they sound like their meant to be. Congratulations :)

This was an amazing chapter, it really showed that even leads can be blind. It's driving me nuts how obvious Ulric is making his feelings to Ava and how she's constantly hiding from them.

Omg!I loved this book so far!I hope you can finish the 15th chapter soon!

This is the first time I'v been on fan fiction, and your story is the one that caught my eye!I am in love with it!

Hopefully the next chapter is when Ava and Ulric can finnally get together!Its been so obvious they like eachother,Iknew it from the start!

I love this book so much, its even better than Twilight, and that's coming from a majour twilight fan(I mean MAJOUR)!

Please finish the next chapter soon because I'm already dieing to read the next chapter!HURRY!

Thankyou so much!

I am happy that everything is ok with her father now. :)
I can't wait to see what happens with Ava and Ulric and Sam and Dawn. x]
Please update soon I really like your story. :)