there just something about this peice. it bombards you as you read in the same way that you are bombarded when you put a chainsaw to grandma's MAJORLY overstuffed armchair. nonetheless, i like it.

Nice fluff, PG. I really like it.

well you told me that I hdto give you suggestions or you swear to the Blue Lady that you would bite me :) So here's some little suggstions:

-I really liked the way it was written, but you should include it into more of a plot.

-Maybe if you either expanded this chapter or even added another.

-The idea was really good,and the ending fit perfectly. (yeah- I know that it wasn't a suggestion . . . )

Is that good enough for suggestions? I don't have many becuase it was very well written and very unique :) I liked it :)

Good, way too short but really good. :) I'd stick two or three chapters of this together though

hmm... m/l shipper i like... nice job. if u like fluff read my story called Take my hand. isa singfic. E-mail me if u wish... i like to get E-mail

Hey, I actually think this scene would be really good as part of a longer fic. Very good imagery and I'd be interested to see how it integrated into a plot.

I liked it. I really think this is good. _

ummmm, you said not to lie right? Well...lol, I get what you were trying to do, and the attempt is applauded. :::smile:::