I understand how he feels more than you know.

wonderful poem but you should write something that tells how the peom came to be. how did chester get to be able to talk to jack so casually? what happened to him in the missing years?

that's sad, especially with the way you described our world. i never really thought about it that way. i think he should have gone with Jack, but if he did, it wouldn't be as good as a poem, i don't think. good job! :)

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Cool...I'd have gone with him.

Ooh, I like this one I wish Chester had gone with Jack though, he seemed so unhappy...****.5/*****

awwwwww...sad. but good! needs a little work, but its still very good.

No offense, but that was stupid. Maybe it needs a bit more re-writing...

Very sad, but it is in many ways very true...

...that was a nice poem but it was a little sad

Very well done! This is going on my favorites list for sure. I'm glad you're writing more NMBC stuff, it's the best in here!