 FanFictionFan345 2009-11-15 . chapter 1This story is facinating please continue it because some stories come after it if I understand the timeline correctly and how Peter and the gang handles this would be interesting to find out. I also love the EC saga. |
 Sailor Sol 2009-08-19 . chapter 1Gasp! I am remiss! I had not realized that I had not reviewed this! But here I am, reviewing now!
Mostly because I want to POKE you into writing more! We misses your fic, precious. Yes, yes, you are being busy going off to graduate school and being all smarty-pants-like, but fic is *highly* important.
I'm going to have to make you another movie trailer to inspire you, aren't I? Must poke at little sister then, to get my good movie program back, and then we shall let the bunnies stew and brew into something fantasmical. We are having much more source material to be working with these days too, precious. Yes, yes, we do.
Right... channeling Gollum a bit too much... methinks it's time to let you get back to Being Smartlike and for me to run away home.
WRITE MORE SOON! |
 temeraire24601 2009-06-21 . chapter 1 Well, I'm not a member of this site, so I can't vote on your poll, so I guess I'll vote here. I'd love to see more of "To Question Why", "Sticks and Stones", "Be Well Tried", and "Year of the Scorpion". In the first three you've got a really wonderful dynamic going between so many different worlds, and all of them blend beautifully. As for "Year of the Scorpion", I'm just a devoted Mummy fan. |
 Princess Lucy 2009-06-16 . chapter 1oh finish! finish! why have you not written anymore for the ECverse it was your stories that got me into HP/Narnia crossoovers in the first place .I love these stories |
 the serious sum sucker-upper 2009-05-05 . chapter 1 Hello! I've just gone and read all of your EC universe stories, and I loved them! The Dark is Rising is one of my favourite series, and as I'd just reread them, I had been looking for some satisfactory follow-ups in its fanfiction section...I saw your story, and your author's note to go with it, thought "eh, why not read some series, it's not like you've got finals or anything!" (I have, but oh well!) Point is, your stories blew me away! the Harry Potter mixed with Chronicles of Narnia idea created this amazing atmosphere within your story, and I gobbled up everything you wrote as fast as I could! (two days) Now, I'm sitting here wishing for more! :( Please keep writing, you have an amazing talent!
Yours,
the S-U |
 Lora Perry 2009-04-27 . chapter 1dude. this was intense.
so very dramatic.
I love this universe!
Every little thing about it!
I need to know more, I need to see how this pans out for Peter. This is such a great start, I can't wait to see more. |
 NoviceWordsmith 2009-03-26 . chapter 1I almost wish I hadn't read this until you have three or four more chapters ready. You are carrying on your EC-verse splendidly, and I can't wait to see where you go with this branch of the story.
I rather like Eileen. She's doing a conscientious job and is following through on solid research. She just happens to be out of her (or practically wizard's) depth in dealing with Pevensie.
You've drawn up a very pretty web and put Peter into an apparently tight corner. Your economy of words allows quick reading, but still gives full and specific detail to what you describe. Well done! Again! Still! |
 ww 2009-03-19 . chapter 1 Wow! It's such a nice surprise to see you've updated (and both this and Sticks and Stones). This is such an intense chapter, especially since it's pretty much just people talking (and not even revealing that much) because you can just tell how both Peter and Aileen are probing at each other (and both are very good).
I really like Aileen especially, since it was so tricky that she'd be able to use Peter's knowledge of the wizarding world against him. (He relied on the silencing spell, forgetting the technology of his own world, when he was so cautious before). Though, I do wonder how they'll use this. I can't see what Peter revealed that would be so odd, other than a knowledge of Dumbledore (which shouldn't be that hard to show, since they have a letter about him from Dumbledore) and a knowledge of the wizarding world. But they certainly didn't get any proof of any sort of offense.
But I can't wait to see what you have planned. |
 Saffygirl 2009-03-19 . chapter 1Cool chapter!
Can't wait for the next update! |
 Kpopophile 2009-03-18 . chapter 1omg. i so late. i love it though. shes questioning peter right ?! omg hes al suave.lmao. love it |
 achillies-eel 2009-03-18 . chapter 1URGH! -strangles Aileen- ..Okay, so maybe I kinda admire her guts; that doesn't excuse her pigheaded belief that Peter's bad!
...Oh wait, is THIS Pevensie Edmund?? It's been ages since I read over these. Maybe I should go read the one before this. :D
Loved it! Aileen really does have guts and a load of misguided determination and righteous indignation. I hope someone sets her straight soon.
Hope to see the next one soon! |
 ElfIcarii 2009-03-17 . chapter 1As usual, looking forward to the next chapter. I love how you blend so seamlessly these worlds...it sparks my imagination as little else does. |
 trecebo 2009-03-17 . chapter 1Well, I see time has tempered your skill into a finer hone than previously noted. Such are the ways of swords and words. We but wield them and they cut--with fine skill or blunt force. I need to check to see if I still have my brain intact. That's how masterful this is. |
 Pandora of Ithilien 2009-03-17 . chapter 1oh hell... aileen's being played, i'm guessing by dumbledore. somehow, she needs to be apprised of what's really going on here. brilliant intro, looking forward to more.
p.s. i sent you an e-mail the other day. i'm not fussed if you just didn't get a chance to reply, i just want to be sure you actually got it. my e-mail address sometimes doesn't send e-mails, it's very annoying. |
 Lita of Jupiter 2009-03-17 . chapter 1Oh mY!
So glad to have you back and I am so angry with Aileen now I do hope that Peter can find a way to deal with her and the muggle accusations without too much damage befalls him!
I'll do a proper review later on LJ and one for the other chapter you posted this week in which I think we met Sirius' future fianceƩ and another of the famed high families |