This is a really nice fanfic. Your dialogue is very nice, and I like the ironic humor. Emma motor. Heh.

Hey I promised I'd read yours and I did, but lets see...I didn't understand the characters, but then you know me by now I'm queen of OBLIVIOUS! *snickers* Oh and the rest of my muses enjoyed it too! *grinz* and they didnt understand the characters either! :P hehe why are you even reading this far into my review? Do you actually care that I read it? Or did you just want to count how many mistakes can happen in one loooooooong review *smart ass grin* hehe so why exactly are you even reading this get back to writing the next chapter cause I do like it so far *two thumbs up and a obnoxious smile*

Hmm. Rudy as a Maverick. Rudy as a Maverick. Eh? it's not that?