oh I love this...:) it's great. I hope you do another one on Folklore!

I'm not much of a writer, so I don't really have anything to offer critique-wise. That said, I suppose that this won't really mean much...but...

I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this! Out of all the Folklore stuff I've read, this is my favorite! It's thoughtful, interesting...and,well gosh~ I just really like it! <3
Not to mention,I'd just finished up Hellrealm when I read this the first time- so it was kinda like, a little bit of extra added to the main story~ I even forgot for a moment that it hadn't happened in the game~ haha~ XD

At any rate, I hope you find the means and interest to write more on this~ ^_^

Nice job! <3

This was fantastic! I think a very accurate depiction of Keats and Ellen's rather awkward if still not lovable relationship.

yay a folklore fanfic!

Ellen and Keats are so cute!! I love how you portrayed their beautiful yet sometimes awkward relationship.

this totally made my day! I wanna write one nw X3

thanks for uploading :D :D :D