This was beautiful. :)

Nice little story!

Good story

Hi. I'm not good at writing reviews, because I never know what to say in them. But here I am, trying to leave a nice review for you, and all I can think to say is that this story was really great. It honestly is one of the best ones I've read for a long time. So,um, well done, and keep it up.

Truely a masterpiece. You're an unbelieveable writer, amazing job.

Loved the jumping back and forth in time, although it took a minute for me to adjust.

Great story of healing, family and friends, and the wonders roasting marshmellows.

I know I should have read this ages ago, but I forgot it existed. I'm glad I did now. Beautiful work, as always, well done :)

I liked it. Confusing as heck but I still enjoyed it.

Wow. It is amazing that you can take a prompt about Bella camping and turn it into this. Your writing is amazing.

This was gorgeous.

I read WWDAN and I was so touched and moved. I've been waiting for Disaffected to wrap up, because of the difficult themes, I'd rather read it without the added anxiety between chapters. I learned that the hard way when I read Heartache by ohlala when I saw it rec'd at TLYDF. I'm a pansy like that.

Anyhoo... I came too see what you were up to, I elated to have read this. Your descriptions are beautiful and vivid, like the with "water-logged trainers," I immediately "saw/felt" water slushing through my toes and the heavy soaked socks. I could almost hear the raindrops on the "black rain slicker or trench coat." The atmosphere and emotions are so tangible. I could feel my mood changing to match the one in the story.

Lovely. Thank you and looking forward to Disaffected!

This was lovely! Your descriptions just pulled me in and I could see everything so clearly. And the whole assumption/insinutation banter between Edward and Bella was hilarious. LOVE LOVE LOVE!

the starter wife approves of this fic.

Oh hon, this is just lovely.

I keep telling you, you spin a good tale! Bella's journey is touching and heart-achy and...yes. I'm so glad you wrote this!

Wonderful piece of writing. I love how you positioned Emmett's ghost story after Bella and Edward's meeting in the woods. It made me backtrack in a good way. This was also very visual. I could see the door knocker changing into Marley's ghost and Emmett's lit up face. And I can always feel your characters.

Thank you for sharing your work.