This...is...beauty. Simple and Pure beauty. Its one of those stories I kick myself for not writing. Well done.VERY well done.

OMG I LOVED IT!

Good story. I like the historical parts woven throughout it. If i had more time I'd leave a better review, but I just wanted to let you know I really enjoyed it.
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This was really good! I liked the continuing alternation between Duo's tale, your writing, and the quote. I also really liked your characterization; even in something relatively short, you managed to get across Duo and Heero's personalities really well. My only critique would be that you either need a beta or to proof read a bit more - some words were misspelled and you had some runon sentences and confusing grammar. Other than that, I really enjoyed this!

I usually avoid tragedies, big-time. But this was kind of intriguing, so I had to give it a go. And in spite of being a "tragedy" it DID have a happy ending--so that's all good. It was a neat perspective on the Spartans and the story of the 300.