i really don't mean to bash, but I always thought agitha was a little creepy. I mean, she had a different rhyme for each bug... er herm.

This was deffinetly an interesting little story. More would have been nice, but sometimes the trick to telling a good story is knowing when to stop.

Makokam out.

I like it. I think this would be better off as one chapter, because three of them separate is way too short, but I like it.

It fits.

Good job!

S.S.

Holy WOW it's short.

Haha now that was interesting. Said so well in so short a story. I saw Agitha/Link and I started thinking, "She's like... 12, maybe. Link's like five years older than her... not to mention... Link and Bug Girl? Eww..." However written well (as is the case most often) any story can be possible.

Nice! My favourite line was “She knows that every princess needs a prince, even if she and Zelda did not have theirs yet.” Even so I preferred the first chapters to the last one, as Midna just seemed a little bit too all knowing for me.