 Thescarredman 2009-11-14 . chapter 9This is some fine writing. The resolution of the Riley/Cameron/John problem is almost Zen: conquest by surrender. Defeat your enemy by joining with him.
The hot parts were entertaining, too. |
 Cptlatnok 2009-05-08 . chapter 3so cam knows riley is from the future? |
 Jeff 2009-04-11 . chapter 9 Lucky john, Riley and cam at the same time, he couldn't handle that. Great story |
 djpc450 2009-04-11 . chapter 9its good hope u right more |
 Aaron Leach 2009-04-11 . chapter 9Awesome chapter. |
 badkidoh 2009-04-11 . chapter 9good chapter, update |
 Drackner Clawrus 2009-04-11 . chapter 9aw sweet, if cut a little short at the end. 9/10 for the fic |
 dc 2009-04-10 . chapter 8 its good hope u right more |
 Aaron Leach 2009-04-10 . chapter 8Awesome chapter. |
 jojobevco 2009-04-09 . chapter 7good chapter |
 Makokam 2009-04-08 . chapter 7Well. That was interesting.
Makokam out. |
 badkidoh 2009-04-08 . chapter 7good chapter |
 Drackner Clawrus 2009-04-03 . chapter 6I really, really like this. It is absolutely brilliant. I'd never even considered a Cameron/Riley posible paring before this fic has loads of potential Looking forward to seeing more. 10/10 for the fic. |
 badkidoh 2009-03-21 . chapter 6good chapter. |
 badkidoh 2009-03-21 . chapter 5it's good,
update. |