Awesome story. I've really enjoyed your portrayal of the interaction between these two. It's quite realistic, in my opinion, and I would like to more interaction between the two in canon.

Well done on this great story.

's good!

You made a couple of mistakes...but your writing is good :)

I like your style. But I don't like Naruto much. Oh well. I guess it's fine. :) Keep it up! XD

, hime