 KiwiClover 2005-10-19 . chapter 1Wow! Are you sure you've never sailed before? Hm...
Anyway, terrific story! It's obvious that you've done quite a bit of research, and you've done a spectacular job of tying it in to a coherent, well-thought out plotline. Well done! I absolutely love how you handle Jim, and especially Blair. Characterization was spot on, and I'm ALWAYS thrilled to see cop-Blair portrayed in the way you've managed: capable, content, and downright ornery! ;)
As for your OC, bravo! Sam's a beautifully written character, and she doesn't detract a bit from the interaction between Jim and Blair. I really enjoyed reading this, and now on to the sequel. Thanks for writing!
~Keara |
 kate 2004-04-21 . chapter 1 this was absolutely fantastic, very descriptive, can't believe you never sailed, the indian history and artifacts was very accuarate as was the geography.
really appreciated this since i live in the pacific northwest myself
well done |