Nice chapter, how you link those main characters in Michiru's past life. Can't wait to see how new born Haru-vampire act when facing Michiru.

GReat job! But how did they meet?

wow! nice chapter.. its really great! hope you update more..

omg awesomeness!


I can't wait to read more on this when you get a chance to post. I am very much in love with the story and it is getting very interesting!

You have to update this SOON! I'm sitting on the edge of my seat wanting MORE! :-)

LOVE ITT! Original idea! LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!

LOVE the new chapter! Very excited to see where this story goes!

wow great chapter. I love back story.

Another long waiting update chappy comes together. What a day!! Anyway..nice chapter. Lost lover find each other under the all knowing teleporting monster. How come our pity vampire Haruka can achieve and protect her love. Geez..please keep working even you can't access to the internet, so definitely your coming chapter will be your quickest update one :)

wow.. interesting.. update soon!

Great job!

Your AU pieces are brilliant. The characters are amazing and once again, Mamoru is the bad guy. Can I guess who your least favorite character is? :-)

I really enjoy this piece. I love your writing, especially the detail!

This has a very good premise. I like the detailing in the writing - excellent. You've also done a great job setting the scene. I look forward to seeing more from you soon!

Your writing style is indeed nice with this intrigue prologue and openning chapter. The plot is quite interesting and keep me looking forward to reading more from you. Hope you will have time to update it soon.