Wonderful stroy, beautifully done. My favourite line:

"Chakotay, *listen* to me. I am *pregnant* and proud to be carrying my *husband's* child, I would *never* abort it. If you have a *problem* with that, petaQ, then that is just too bad."

"I know, my love. For now, it is our secret."

Okay, I will be frank-this story is really corny. I mean, really corny. Both the plot and the characters feel somewhat two-dimensional. I wish you told more of the plot from their POVs.. I know it's romance but it doesn't have to sound goo-goo eyed and lollipop. I was about to dismiss it as PWP, but it's not that either- you should definitely fine tune this story.

I read the entire thing and I loved all of it!

that was sweet, I liked this part the most

wonderful fic!

omg! sooooooooooooo sweet!

That was great. What else is there to say?

WOW! That was really good! I really liked it! Keep up the good work!