pretty good, like to see a comfrontation of the two

Man, this is really good. I love the way you've written Fletcher's thoughts, they're hilarious! Keep up the good work _

this should be rated M because of the cursing :)

screw May, Red is mine XD

hahahaha. i love this chap. so funny.

Doctor I-Love-Flasing-My-Medical-Degree-At-Kids

Screw you too, old man.

DUDE! THIS BRINGS BACK ALL THE SUSPENSE OF THE BOOK!

This rocks! Your version is how it should have been *laughs*.

Keep writing, I can't wait to see how it'll go from here on :D

Wow i love it! please keep writing it i wanna see how it turns out,there aren't enough half moon story's on this sight,and this one is the best iv read...please please continue

please please please update! i know its been a while, but i LOVE the bike scene, and i would adore seeing your take on it!

Like the story, hope you keep updating!

I am not going to lie, i have no idea what is going on! But i like it, so update soon! :P x

im still here lol dont give up i enjoy reading half moon but there arnt many so thank you

I'm not sure if that was where you we're planing on ending the story or if you will be continuing, so if you are please do continue because this looks like it could getting interesting. So if so update soon, please -

love this please upload more :)

Yay! Another Red/Fletcher fic! Great first two chapters, though there are some grammatical errors you might want to look over and change. Otherwise, this story is gold. Please, please, continue it! Update soon!

-peace

so i'm not the only one who saw slash in that book *nods aprovingly*