 Player Zero 2009-07-01 . chapter 4Nice Chapter, very sweet.
Max and Mariam are the best! |
 Kuzu-Eimin 2009-05-29 . chapter 4Oh God I'm in love <3
Really cute. I'm not into romance, but YOUR fanfic's are a whole new level - YAY FOR MARIAM AND MAX! <3
Waiting patiently for May. :D |
 soraskybeauty 2009-05-27 . chapter 4wow these are really good very cute fluffy and very romantic i loved the april one and tyson hilary who doesnt love that couple, this is a very good story? one-shots? either way very good writing |
 Darkened-Storm 2009-05-27 . chapter 3I like it, this is really good =]
i hope you keep writing =] |
 CaptainKai01869 2009-05-26 . chapter 4Cute, with not getting popcorn at first, poor Maxie. But don't pick up on those Tyson habits, kid, lol.
Cool battle between Kai and Tyson. Cocky dope loses, no surprise there. Missing the phone? Oh well, cool Granger voicemail, sounds just like what Tyson would say.
Trying the Saint Shields? Hm, nice idea if Dunga doesn't block the ringtone out, lol
Hahaha, Ozuma shouting at Joseph to answer his phone or else, nice one, lol. Joseph goes and throws it, breaking it. Um, Mariam could hurt him for that, hehe.
After all that messing they had to run and get wet. Nice of Max to carry Mariam, that was sweet.
Aww, he tended her wound and then they sat together and she fell asleep on him...aww.
Can't wait for May ^^ |
 Kuzu-Eimin 2009-05-18 . chapter 3Me loves : D Brooklyn and Julia? Never thought of it o_O' But still love it, the same as the whole series *grin*
But, Smiffy-sama, how long can we wait for April? We want April! We want April! |
 MElissa 2009-05-06 . chapter 3 Thats was cool chapter. Brooklyn and Julia are a sweet couple. I like who ir was wrote too.
*thumbs up* :D :D |
 CaptainKai01869 2009-05-04 . chapter 3Aww, so sweet. Brooklyn not liking alarms, lol and the comment about his breakfast, hehe.
Garland giving advice, okay. Brooklyn was sunk at first, but a puppy sounds cute.
Mariah helped Julia well. Good advice, cat girl, lol.
Aww, nice homecoming present. Come in and massive kiss.
Aww, a puppy for Julia, but some things don't change. Well, Brooklyn will live because love conquers all ^^
Can't wait for your update. |
 Kiki Ling 2009-03-20 . chapter 2i like this! update soon?
kiki |
 CaptainKai01869 2009-03-19 . chapter 2Great chapter. I liked Ian's stupidity at the start. Does Bryan hate Friday? What a dope, lol.
I liked Vixen and Ashley's argument, just like Bryan and Ian, well, except more physical than verbal, lol.
And I loved the romancy part at the end, seeing Bryan's romancy side will take a while to get used to, lol.
I liked his gift for Vixen as well.
You are very good at romance, way better than me. Well done and can't wait for next chapter :) |
 CaptainKai01869 2009-03-18 . chapter 1Wonderful work and the romance was terrific. I can't wait to the next chapter. I liked how Kai didn't cheer for Tyson just because Ray was on Max's side, lol. |
 Melissa 2009-03-18 . chapter 1 Awesome story Hannah, Its really sweet. Hilary and Tyson...there perfect for each other. :) |
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