 Somewhere In Time 2009-10-20 . chapter 7So is there a sequel, or is this it?
I love how you used some of the lesser known characters!! Sin, Carrie, Cassandra Cain...and Damien, of course. :) |
 Somewhere In Time 2009-10-19 . chapter 1Sin! I know her!! xD!
I've never seen a story with her in it, and I'm glad to see her name here, and it seems she'll be important too. |
 Superspyder CJ 2009-08-25 . chapter 6Best. Chapter. Ever.
If there was any doubt in my mind that you are the best Teen Titans writer, this chapter squashed it. You used Megan! And Lian! And Chris!(You know he's really Zod's son, right?) And a lot of other guys that I like.
I don't like Damien, and I never will, but I'm glad to see that you're developing his character and having him show at least a little remorse. And Chapter Seven? I don't have the words to describe it.
Keep up the good work!
-CJ
P.S. This part is my favorite.
“Dark Vengence!” someone yelled from above.
“What the f&ck?” Static asked and was then tackled by the unknown assailant.
The confused electromancer looked up to see a redheaded girl perched on his chest.
“Hi! I’m Misfit.” She chirped.
P.P.S. Which Flash does Titans South have? |
 Rider Paladin 2009-07-14 . chapter 7Well, things are getting interesting now. Miss Martian and Titans!Martian Manhunter, how are they connected? Sucks what happened to Roy. I'm guessing the "new" Nightwing is Jason Todd. Liked your homage to Heath Ledger's Joker, and your shout-out to The Batman's Riddler. Looking forward to more of this story. |
 Sakura Katana 2009-06-28 . chapter 7I like Kitten Van Cleese. Keith Hedger? Ha. Very awesome. New Brother Blood is also very awesome.
Your timeline is kind of confusing. How did they get the records from the past that doesn't exist? |
 PhinalPhantasy 2009-06-26 . chapter 7Wonderful chapter. I liked the flashback battle of Richard vs. Damien. The roster for the evil Titans is pretty nasty, especially if there's a guy that's part Trigon. Brother Blood and Luthor too...wow. I'm guessing the Damien of this altered timeline is Nightwing. |
 anon 2009-06-25 . chapter 7 Cool doing the Dark Knight and The Batman inerprets of Joker and Riddler
I wasn't expecting Kitten but cool
Didn't see Eddie either AWESOME especially Trigon's stuff
So did Luthor have Megan cloned or what
Brother Blood SWEET!
Is it Jason or Damian or someone else entirley
Sweet Luthor allied with evil future versions of the heroes awesome!
You're a genius |
 JuseaPeterson 2009-06-25 . chapter 7Wow, that was pretty interesting. Not sure who the new Nightwing is, but interesting about the villians. |
 Sakura Katana 2009-06-25 . chapter 6I love the Titans South! They are friggin awesome! Best future-team you've created yet, I think. I'm glad Luthor's with the evil-Titans. Luthor involvement usually explains everything. |
 Rider Paladin 2009-06-24 . chapter 6Thank God that crisis of faith was over and done with quickly. Or rather, thank Sin. But did she have to hit him so hard? ;)
And the reason Lex Luthor will never cure cancer is simple: He's a selfish, obsessive, megalomaniacal jerk. Tell that to "anon" next time he starts talking about the great things Lex Luthor could do. |
 anon 2009-06-24 . chapter 6 Maybe General Ulysses Hadrian Armstrong |
 PhinalPhantasy 2009-06-24 . chapter 6Very good chapter buddy. So due to Dick grayson dying, the Titans went evil and took over the country and are basically like the Justice Lords. M'gann is a white martian? I thought the White Martians were evil. I like your team and their costumes a lot. Poor Static getting glomped by Misfit lol. |
 JuseaPeterson 2009-06-24 . chapter 6Good chapter. I actually liked how you went into all their introductions. It was a breather, and it gave some insight into the new characters.
Poor Damien.
I hope they can get everything back to how it should be. |
 anon 2009-06-24 . chapter 6 Harm and Slobo maybe do what you want I'm not even requesting use or don't use any
You are enormously talented |
 anon 2009-06-24 . chapter 6 I certainly didn't mean that after doing such things Luthor and Ra's shouldn't be brought to trial and held accountable for their actions it's just impossible for me to believe that after doing so a jury of their peers after factoring future generations into pragmatic utilitarianism (which is what seperates us from the animals) using a single iota of reasonable and rational thought when knowing what they could do for us as a species would find them guilty
It is also impossible for me to accept that a man of such intellect who isn't certifiably insane would be satisfied with the rest of the world is cannon fodder and I'm special I think Luthor at least sees himself as a savior of humanity he could improve us at a genetic level (if it wasn't for the White Martians ancient experiments we'd all be like Kryptonians or Daxamites) if he doesn't do such things we as a species are doomed
A story is about conflict (except romance where you have sexual tension, togetherness action, or smut) villains are the conflict if they are just thugs and psychopaths and interested in money and power as ends in and of themselves it just isn't as interesting to me and simple good versus simple evil is simply boring Now I understand if the heroes can't accept any means necessary because they represent the status quo as they are owned by corporate America have to despite the writers' overuse of the government is evil or worse stupid and we must overlook society's bounds to save it which if you'd think about it would lead to barbarism or the heroes would have to admit they are hypocrites or at least the villian has point
Not that thugs and psycopaths can't be entertaining (especailly in the hand of such enormously talented writers like you) it's just more so if the villain has a point
Can't wait to see Luthor's Titans Here are my gueses as the only ones I can come up with Duella Dent, Enigma, perhaps Kid Stygia as an evil counterpart to Kid Eternity if you include him also or not, like Luthor's daughter like that Alexis girl from the Legion of Superheroes cartoon who is his descendent not a mech or power suit but like Luthor in Justice League toward the end where he had gadgets to counteract every superpower and turn them on their wielder, perhaps Drax also, Scorn and Fury could be like apprentices to the Wrath or Rage could be to the Wrath like Nightwing is to Bats, or Olympus could be Prometheus' apprentice |