woah.

so cute! and its your first english fic. of course there's problems with grammar but it was still a great read :D

i wish there was more!

Please continue it soon! v

"Miroku approached his head to hers"...?

And? What next? I want to know!

Love this story, can't wait to see how Miroku will manage these new feelings/impulse. Please keep on writting (english or french), there are so few Yukan Club fanfic.