That was written beautifully!
I'm amazed!

YAY HYU SO HAPPY!
Hehe! ^/^
This was great!
You know, I knew this would happen. You see, when I thought up the challenge I was thinking about shipping (after I read just this absolutely horrible KuroFai fanfiction in which they both acted like OOC gay rabbits trying desperately to mate whilst still keeping the rating at T) and I thought 'allot of people make the characters OOC if they're shippers.' Then I realized that if someone were to write fanfiction for the other ship with 'keep it as in character as possible even though you don't believe the character would do this' as one of the rules, they'd probably end up keeping the characters more in character than people who actually believed in said ship.
Of course, judging on the author's note, I'm worried that you're now a KuroFai fan. Which, you know, clearly I have no problem with, seeing as I believe they're right, but you were one of the five last TomoKuro fans I knew existed in the entire world. So yeah. Now I'm worried. o_O
Anyway, this was spectacularly in character and well written, even if it did take a bit of a really long time to get up on the site... um, forget I said that last bit. ^_^
Anyway! Thank you very much for participating in the Challenge and I'm glad you got over Writer's Block.
~Wallpaper

not bad - i just cant find words to describe it :) - i liked how there were different lil bits that was reflected in the manga - although so subtly

I think that it was really good. Also, I think that they are IC so no harm done there. I liked how you wrote it out in short little scenes because it made the story much more interesting. Good work! ^.^

~Princess Fawna

Aw! That was adorable :3 Are you sure you're not actually a KuroFai fan Mystic-chan? Thank you so much for participating in our challenge. You did a magnificent job. I think that for a KuroTomo supporter, you did extremely well. The only thing that I didn't like was that it wasn't as... I don't know how to explain it. Like.. they could have seemed more... together-ish during the different pieces. Erm.. that was bad explaining. Like.. it felt like they didn't actually like each other still- kind of like they were just friends. But you did good! Great work!

(: Tell your friends!

That was really good! Oh the angst! Oh the fluff! Oh the epic cuteness at the end! XD Thank you for being the first KuroTomo to participate in the challenge XD

interesting. ^^ good job.

TT3TT YOU SAID I'D GET TO READ IT FIRST! D: I DEMAND SIRIREMUS AS PUNISHMENT WAIFU!

All that being said, it's gorgeous dear. The best piece I've seen you come up with in a while. I am very proud of all the work you put into this. It doesn't seem strained or unnatural at all. It's like you were born to write this and it was never a challenge to begin with. Great job!