for your first time at writig M-rated scenes you are really good. and thats saying something.
i hope you update soon because you haven't in forever!
plus i hope you dont ming adding another M-rated scene soon... pretty please!

please update sometime soon!
its been awhile and this story is too amazing!

this is amazing!
please update soon!

OMG!!
i read the whole story today with out stopping, it is truely like, the best story i have ever written. It is so amazing, you have done a great job.
And please update ASAP!
i wanna see what happenes nect after reading it all ! lol :)
(and sorry to not reviewing on every chapter, i had to keep on reading :p )
x

Loved it!

Awesome chapter, loved the fluff. Update soon!

soo cute but soo sad that Vanessa heading back to LA, and Zac is staying with his mum, i hope he thier for a long time, so he can go be with Vanessa in LA.
awesome chapter
can't wait for the next one

I love your story =]

update soon

Aw, such a cute chapter!
Next chapter'll be sad though xD
Can't wait, and have fun in the Bahamas! (:

wow how hot was that? intense much?
i lovedd it.
I dont know what else to say cos I am still in shock.
happy shock lol.

ohh no i dont think i can read the next chapter if your gonna make it bad!

ive missed so much!
aww no dang! how dare he answer his phone lol.
hoe mom is ok...

you story is great, fantastic . The scene is good too. I'm like super excited to see the rest

this chapter was amazing ! =D