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FreekyDisaster18 2/19/11 . chapter 1
I think this is so cute! Beautiful.
alix33 3/19/09 . chapter 1
"“You had better go the whole ten yards for this.”" - LOL, it probably IS ten yards in the tough Mossad environment (and not so much a Ziva-ism), while any poor wussy American federal agency only gets up to nine yards!

"his arms filled with lavender, vanilla, rosewood, jasmine, and chamomile scented candles." - Yum! If I were ziva, I would have liked the rosewood best. That IS a totally yummy fragrance.

"When he explained to the cashier what his plans were, she suggested he try their newest scent of incense, conveniently named Sex on the Beach. He wasn’t sure if she was on the level or if she was simply trying to make another sale, but he doled out an additional bit of cash for the incense and an incense burner." - Gracious good Lord! I always thought Tim was far more courageous than he ever gets credit for, but that conversation with the cashier just proved it.

"He had some nice scented oils and lotions" - DAMN, I envy Ziva!
Jherek 3/19/09 . chapter 1
That was great. I love McGee/Ziva as a couple and you capture them very well in all your stories. Your characterization was spot on, especially with McGee being distraught that his perfect plan went down in flames thanks to a very persistent Ziva.
McGiva 3/18/09 . chapter 1
loved it!
Norey 3/18/09 . chapter 1
Wow that was so cute. I would love to see more McGiva stories - maybe a follow up to where their relationship goes from here.
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