.Gosh.I just LOVE this story!Extra brownies complements of my sister the !

Wow. This was an amazing story. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time and I'm sure my expressions ranged from a goofy grin to a look of abject fear. You did a great job of portraying all the characters and making the readers truly love them. Not to mention how glad I was to see Lina take out Xellos in the end and not simply rely on Zel for that. She wanted to stand on her own two feet and that is exactly what she did.

Great job.

wonderful story... really liked it... good job... great work...

OMG i usually hate AU's but this one was amazing! Kepp on writting!

crystal

the one and only

twas awesome! and it's actually complete. Good job!

aw! that is so cute! yay! you finished it! im so happy...

YES U FINALLY UPDATED!I AM SO PROUD OF U!I LUV IT!YEAY!but i am a little sad that it is all over!(crys on bfs shoulders)But Im ok.(really is not)

PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE!

ah! Cliffhanger! So cruel! You must Update now! please, i beg of you!;_;*wah*

Great chapter, albeit short. Zelgadis used very strong words, "if you loved me, you'd let me live". Wow. If I were his parents, I'd be dying of shame right at this moment.

Humm, who could it be that decided to invade Lina'a space? Zeladis? Or someone else? Hum... ]

I'm waiting for the next chapter! I wish you lots of inspiration! ;)

It's great *beam* Want more - Or else the people in my head will come after you. Over all really good.

You stun me. This was so perfect and exciting and wonderful. I went and read a little of the back story to remember what was going on - and let me tell you again - this story is stunning. For just a simple romance, it's integuing - way above the cut.

I seriously enjoy this fic and am so happy that you decided to continue it.

I'm cheering for you!

Please update soon and don't give up on us!

Gosh it's getting so good! I can tell the next chapter is going to be very enjoyable. Is Lina gonna open up to Zel? I hope he goes and kicks Xellos' butt! Loving the L/Z moments *waves a mini L/Z flag :D!* can't wait to read more!

gonna keep reading but I gotta review now to say how much I love this! Aiee! You're truly talented. I love how you've made this so believable and real, some stories you read have people falling in love in like 2 lines and it's so corny. But yours is really enjoyable to read and watch as it progresses. The holding hands thing was SOO cute I can SO picture that happening! Er anyway I'm kinda ranting.. it's 5am and I'm still awake O_O I'm a weirdo, and you're a great writer! I love all your stories and I'm gonna read the rest too (after I sleep, that is.. _ !) take care, byebye!

YAY for the update!

When is someone gonna beat up luna?

SIGH.

Oh well, I await the next chapter!