AWESOME!

Aww man. I was hoping that Ron was the new Rorschach. but oh well. I wonder who the new one is.

Is it just me, or has Adrian totally lost it? All those years of keeping 1985 a secret must have taken a toll on his mental stability

NOW I’ve seen the Watchmen movie.
And what a movie it was.

It was sure something seeing all that went down before current events of Watchmen: Sins of the Father.

It’s a tragic loss for the villain community of Doctor Dementor.
He was one of my favorites.
Oh well.

I felt bad for Kim that what happened to Dementor happened right in front of her face.
Even getting some of his blood on said face from the shot that took him out.
EWW!

Great relief Ron and Kim got saved by Nite Owl/James and Silk Spectre/Ann from GJ.
Never thought I’d see them turn against Team Possible.

But not a real surprise they did with Adrian in charge of them.

Now that Nite Owl and Silk Spectre have blown their secret identities in front of their daughter and Ron, I can’t wait to hear their explanation to them.

It’s good to have Rorschach back.
Or at least his identity.
The individual is doing a great job of impersonating him if it’s not really him.
I like it when the journal entries are done.

Looking forward to next time.

I'm sorry to see Betty co-operating with Ozymandias. However, it makes sense that Adrian, if he were behind GJ, would have created a training program to ensure his agents were fully and completely obedient, even if they know his orders are ethically wrong. I doubt they even realise that, like his Vietnamese man-servants, they are entirely 'expendable' once their usefulness is exceeded by their potential for being a security risk. Oh, Adrian would add more nightmares to his collection for the act, but it wouldn't slow him down.

In fact, I wonder if the nightmares are what brought him to his current low pass. The smartest man on Earth reduced to a paranoiac plotting the murder of children to protect a 'peace' that has never really existed except in very short burts whereever he could focus the most force. In the end, I think he will bless the man who knocks him from his throne for, I suspect, to finally be able to rest would be a gift beyond any other one possible.

So... Jon's back and someone has taken up Rorscharch's mantle. Dan (Jim) and Laurie (Anne) are both apparently active and it looks like Kim and Ron are about to be inducted into the New Watchmen. Maybe Shego and Drakken too, against Adrian, Team Go and GJ. Jeez... Rorscharch is right! This really is going to be a war!

BenRG's Rating: 7.5/10

Kim and Ron's world just got turned upside down by GJ's attack on them. Glad her folks got there in time before it got uglier.

Like someone else, I may know who "Rorshach" is, but I'm keeping mum for now.

Hope Kim's ready for some more hard truths...and for the war to come.

Ready for the next installment!

Oh yeah! Rorschach is back and he's bringing treats for all the bad little boys and girls who want to monkey with the world in the name of "the greater good!"

Since Ron's being targeted for his potential to match Dr. Manhattan in the power stakes, my guess of him taking up the role of Rorschach is completely off base. Though the comments the new Rorschach made leads me to believe that it's someone like Drakken or another person who's dismissed Ron as a goof and insignificant in the past. Gonna be mighty interesting if it is Drakken, since the first Rorschach was Dan's closest friend and Drew Lipsky was a friend of James' till the lab accident ;)

Rorschach is alive? Yah! It could be someone taking up the Rorschach name since Walter died which is fine with me.

I was always kind of bummed Rosrshacrch died. He was the most complex person out of the whole Watchmen gang.

You should have written the Watchmen movie script.

WOW!I mean really Wow!

You bring back Rorschach.This a million question in one.

Ron and Kim are going get over the shock soon.Then realize GJ tried to have Ron killed.And probably make take the blame for Dementor death.

You're doing the makers of "Watchmen" proud.

Wow. Another great fic. I look forward to seeing where you take this one.

“Get these damned amateurs out of here, Jupiter!”

One word from this sentence and the word buffoon makes me think of a possibility for Rorschach.
Great read and I can't wait to see how you do the explanation.

Excellent. One of the best Fan-Fics I've ever read. When are you gonna post Chapter 4?

not bad, at first i thought Ron was going to be the new Rorschach, but now, for some reason, i'm thinking it Drakken. don't ask me y, i just think it's him

Ron isnt Rorschach that sucks. But oh well great ch up date soon!!