Loved your story. Just love JPC, especially Craig. Can't wait for your next story with them. Next time I'd enjoy more of your own imagination and less of the story line. You do such a great job yourself. Thanks for all your hard work. x

"Craig if you listen to me, and follow him, you might have sex with him." ha ha! that's great!! that sure made up his mind!

wow great love it

wow i love it the story line behind john paul and craig is insane and i love it im super happy that they did end up together but its wow i love hollyoaks insanely bad i love everything about this story too because it reminds me of the thing i love :)