OMG! I've been hoping to run across a story about this! PLEASE keep writing?

eagerly awaiting the next chapter

Please go on with your story, I want to read more about Daemon and Janelle!

You're continuing this, I hope. Please don't leave it there!

*shivers* Wonderful. You capture the voice of the books perfectly.

I enjoyed reading this exchange between Daemon and Jaenelle. You kept the feel of AB, but still had a distinct ownership of your story, which is difficult to do, I know. Daemon going into rut hasn't really been explored, and I liked your take on his fear of what had happened in the past. Wonderful ending line!

Beautiful! The writing and descriptions are so wonderfully in tune with the story, and the characters so far are so true to the original book. I'm very excited to read more as you continue the story.

I loved reading this story. It sounded so much like Anne Bishop's writing, that I forgot that it was actually just fan fiction... I just have to ask, Will you write the scene of the rut? If you do, I SO wan't to read it... heh heh, naughty me...

Very good! I like the description of Luciar's anger always being hot. That's exactly how I think of him verses Daemon or Saetan. The interaction between Lucivar and Saeten and their worry for both Jaenelle and Daemon is perfect. It fits the story great. O'course, I think their worry is all for naught 'cause I think he'll just play with her.

Beautifully done. The last line clinched it.

I have to say, I can't believe it took so long for someone to write about this situation.
I wrote a little story (in portuguese) in which Daemon went through rut, but I couldn't decide if I should even attempt to translate it to english and post it here (I can't write only in english).
So, when I saw what this story was about, I was curious about how you would carry the story. It’s actually pretty different from what I had imagined (which is good). You have a different approach to this subject than mine, and I like it, I think this could have happened.
Anyway, it's great someone took this situation and wrote about this. Daemon in rut... yummy! *dreamy smile*
You're doing a great job, I'm loving it and I hope you continue this.

Awesome. Truly awesome.

Brilliant piece. I love the bit at the end. It's really well done!

I love it, love it, love it! I guess I can just stop writing my own FanFiction now 'cause this is great! I've been thinking about writing a Daemon in rut story but now I don't have to. Yipee! I like how Jaenelle acknowledges that she has left him twice. And I like that she is more grown up in many ways than in the books. It is a personal theory of mine that a female acting properly should be able to handle a WP in rut if she does it correctly, but the Blood has just forgotten that. It doesn't make sense that a male would kill or maim even the woman that he loves in the rut unless she makes the wrong move. I can't wait for the next chapter...hopefully there is one!

Oh The last Line!

Witch raised her midnight eyes. “Because you’ll be dancing with me.”

It stuck with me for awhile now, I've repeated it over and over rolling it around on my tongue and it fits. Completely.

Well Done I can't wait to read more!