Wow, this is really nice. The details are great but not overwhelming and it really captures the "drowning" feeling. Keep up the great work!

fantastic story, you have a lot of talent. I love Erik/Mag

Luv ya
Sunflower

First: Great to see you back on the scene! I really adore Desire and Devotion, so this is a great little gem! I am intrigued . . .

Second: It is great to see a macabre stab at the Meg/Erik genre. Nice job!

Awesome chapter! Amazing!

phantomluver4ever

I rarely ever read Meg/Erik stories, and yours always make me regret that =D I've missed reading your updates and random oneshots!!

As always, a phenomenal piece! It just begs to be read...I love the way your stories flow. Keep up the fantastic writing...I want more updates :p

nice. i love how you've left the POV totaly open; it adds a lovely touch.

also love the use of the one line, 'yet'.

all the best, l x