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Akai Tabaji 1/27/12 . chapter 7
Allen got invited to the ball! So unexpected. Maybe Kanda will find out who he is, and I wonder if he will find his necklace, I believe, that Kanda has. I can't wait for the next update! I love this story it is amazing. :D Update soon!

Akai
Kitty Kimi-chan 11/10/11 . chapter 7
This story is really good...and funny, of course...

please write more of it so I can continue reading.
iamjadenstar25 8/17/11 . chapter 1
the story is "nice" thats all i can say :)
kandaz 7/31/11 . chapter 7
So I asume that since this was last updated in 09 that there wont be more chapters. But I was so hoping to see Allen in a dress again, and then see Kanda meet "girl" Allen again would be fun. *sigh*

KZ
ChiKazex 7/13/11 . chapter 7
I can't wait for the next chapter, When they get to the party.

Kanda has to see Allen again
Hai-Ying 5/28/11 . chapter 7
hurry and review!
Moyashi.beansprout 1/25/11 . chapter 7
Gaarin: What about Rhode and Lenalee? 3
moshimellow 1/1/11 . chapter 7
Hurrr-larious! XD
resha 31773 11/9/10 . chapter 7
the story was funny and good please update...

ONEGAI...
The Puppeteer Master 8/6/10 . chapter 7
I love your fanfics.
Kawaii Bishyness 7/28/10 . chapter 7
dude, this story is awesome, but can't you update it? ;_;
The hungry Hybrid 7/26/10 . chapter 7
Even though it's been some time since you last updated this fic I'll review anyway.

I've just read all 7 chapters and I think that the story is quite good. Fun and sweet (especially when Kanda covered Allen from that vase).

I have a slight idea of what you could do for chapter 8. It could be about the day or the few hours before the masqeraude ball. And you need to bring up the necklace that Allen dropped in the first chapter, Kanda could be wearing it at the ball and Allen sees that.

Anyway, during the short time before the ball you could have Road and Lenalee dress up Allen as a girl again (Then at the ball Kanda recognizes her/him - which Lenalee notices and makes the connection that Allen is the 'girl' Kanda's looking for), Allen sees the necklace (or was it a ring) on Kanda.

...

Actually when it comes to that ring/necklace it would be better if Kanda accidentally dropped it and Allen rushed to pick it up and exclaims that it's his. And Kanda is mystified. You could have Kanda give it to Allen or have Kanda say that it's the woman's accessory and can't give it to anyone but her. So Allen grudgingly dresses as the woman again (with the help of Road and Lenalee) and meets Kanda at the ball and gets it back. Kanda asks for her name but the what happens next is for you to decide.

I hope I'm not overdoing this 'give-idea'-thingy, what I just wrote is just what kind of feeling I got when reading this. This is how I see the story moving forward. But it's still your story and I don't know what kind of ending you've imagined so all the 'suggestions' I've written might be wrong for this story.

Wow, this review is quite long. But I do hope that you'll get some inspiration from this, this is a good story, you just have to finish it _
Penguins-in-America-Oh-My 5/8/10 . chapter 7
wow this is really good please continue!
FallenAngelYamiHikari 3/15/10 . chapter 7
You need to update this! Really! You do! I wanna see what happens when Kanda finds out that the "girl" is Allen! I can totally see Kanda freaking out about Allen cross-dressing and about himself being gay!
Nora Kovacs 1/5/10 . chapter 7
“Room. You. Bandages.”

Hm...I can pretty much imagine that...Allen bandaged to the bed in his own room,and Kanda...

This fanfiction is awesome, if you wont write more chapters I will haunt you for eternity...or at least sexually har...khm, I mean to hung you from my window 50 meters far from the safe groung.

So write moar!

You fan: Nora
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