|Reviews for Hunter Sentences|
| Guest 2/2/13 . chapter 1
You should do the one called kiss! XD
| yconne 6/17/12 . chapter 1
Very well-written, and so adorable, this is the kind so fic I've been tryin to find my whole life. Really awesome :)
| azab 4/23/12 . chapter 1
i loved it a lot
| heylalaa 11/4/11 . chapter 1
every sentence is magical. everything is beautiful, and really describe the bonds between gon and killua. i love all of them down to every bits. :)
| BeyondMyReach 4/25/11 . chapter 1
My favorite is #41. It's awesome.
| morningdawn202 11/23/10 . chapter 1
I really like this story. Great job!
| Luwain 9/6/10 . chapter 1
My boyfriend must think I've gone nuts. I couldn't keep myself from chuckling, even laughing out loud - and, besides that, crying at the same time. This is truly excellent. I'm not English speaking, but for me the language was "perfect". It was a pleasure to read these sentences and I'll definitely read them again many times (I always re-read everything I like) just to get the rainbow of emotions it just gave me.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart. I have read some of your fanfics (HXH) and I truly adore your style. Humour, softness, a vocabulary that is interesting and variable, a very "mind-opening" experience. (I won't even try to pick any favourites...;) )
| StillThereForMe 7/27/10 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh... so many great lines. But I narrowed it down to two favorites that I would love to be extended:
"#22 (Jealousy): Killua had never experienced jealousy, since the only opinion he'd ever cared for was his father's and he was his father's chosen heir; he was therefore unprepared for it when the friendliest person he'd ever met became the center of his world, and at first he felt threatened by Gon's attachment to everything that wasn't him."
That is so true, and I can only imagine all the times Killua's gotten jealous, and no one else has ever noticed...
"#40 (Innocence): After awhile Gon learns that when his question has embarrassed Killua, Killua will make up an absurd or perverted reply; but so great is Gon's innocence in so many matters that he frequently can't tell the real answers from the jokes, and so suffers the indignity of other people's reactions when he inadvertently offers up one of Killua's inventions in conversation."
This is so probable, I'm shocked it hasn't happened in the manga/anime already. There needs to be a fic of this! XD
| Shiruy 2/15/10 . chapter 1
Ah, I love these short snapshots and the relationship they portray. You did wonderfully trying to show what those two have between them! And though they are all lovely, my absolute favourite is number 49. Just imagining Killua with permanently just-got-electrocuted hair, like he has when he attacks that Chimera Ant Yupi with his lightning... *laughs* XD Awesome.
| Luna Seine Louve 8/7/09 . chapter 1
lol! what fanfic was this from? "#6 (Rain): At first, they run around in the rain a lot together, delighting in the fact that there's no one to tell them to go inside; but then Killua develops his Nen technique and becomes a human lightning rod, and though he claims it doesn't hurt Gon can't stand watching it, so they are forced indoors."
| Pikachu Hoshi 6/17/09 . chapter 1
I think these sentences are cute and have great meanings
| Kria 6/10/09 . chapter 1
Cute! Like it lots!
| PopcornObsessed-DragonLuver 5/7/09 . chapter 1
#3: I love the use of imagery, comparing Killua to a housecat.
#7: Blackmail? I'd've thought it was more like bribary. lol
#9: Even better, I can honestly imagine them doing just that.
#10: Very clever. It's almost like the 'Telephone' one except that it's more of a one way thing. :D
#11: heh heh. heckling
#17: the way you've compared their separate views of the same thing was well done, especially in only one sentence.
#20: just because I like it.
#21: how do you win ...?
#22: Poor Killua. Gon gets attached to so many things though that he would have to get over it quickly or go insane.
#26: I'd like to read a story like that.
#28: great ... although i can't really imagine either of them being sick at all.
#29: I like the way you showed everyone's opinion ... jealous, that's classic.
#32: just because.
#34: of course Killua wouldn't admit to needing sound effects, but they're so much fun! XD
#43: sweet and simple.
#46 & #47: it's great how you've showed how they can be similar and opposite at the same time. how could i separate them?
#50: a great one to end on.
| Randy 4/1/09 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh! I LOVE YOU !
| JJ 4/1/09 . chapter 1
My Favourites were #s: 3, 7, 9, 10, 11, 16, 17, 18, 21, 22, 27, 28, 29, 30, 31, 32, 34, 36, 37 (i can relate being technology retarded myself), 38, 39, 43, 46, 47, 48, 49, 50
i love these ... but they're all they're hilarious, or sweet.
you've really displayed their individual personalities well.