|Reviews for Right Here Waiting|
| xRayneBloodx 4/21/13 . chapter 2
This was really fun to read, especially the lemony-goodness! ;) I was a little disappointed with Itachi's personality though, (although it was necessary for the plot, so I understand). Thanks for posting this!
| Codaline 4/16/13 . chapter 2
Okay I was so ready to kill you! And then he lived :D I forgive you, this was awesome...
| Misaki-NeeChan 4/15/13 . chapter 2
This was amazing. You surprised me with the plane getting stuck :) that's what I like in stories/books. Being surprised! Man, you're an amazing writer. Awesome story 3
| xXAli-FanXx 3/22/13 . chapter 2
You, you, ******** idiotic sadistic son of a. ***** you made me cry! I though Naruto had died I was about to dig your grave a locate you and perform a very painful torture procedure on you. Your writing is so beautifully crafted though, and awesome with the sex! You know you're an awesome writer when you make your readers experience a crazy emotional roller pasted. And you sir/ma'am have done just that! :D I love it! favorite!
| andysanime 1/31/13 . chapter 2
Good job on this story.
| AkilovesKana 1/12/13 . chapter 1
amazing ending and i only forgive you for making me think Naruto was dead bcuz ur story was so good XD
| TheEndofTag 11/30/12 . chapter 2
LOVE IT! Damn hot and the pot was just awesome!
| HavenCraze 11/29/12 . chapter 2
That was so intense. The sudden switch to the funeral... I just had to skim ahead a bit to make sure.
But those scenes of man sex were... hot as mother fucking hell.
| HavenCraze 11/29/12 . chapter 1
I did not have enough air capacity for how amazingly hilarious i found this chapter.
Almost died of oxygen deprivation, oh and blood loss, extreme blood loss... -grins lecherously-
| UchihaNaruTeme4 11/28/12 . chapter 2
This is one of your BEST. This scared the shit out of me. I was about to bitch up a storm when the cemetery scene began. Wonderful imagery, the angst and suspense nearly unforgivable-for freaking me out-Naruto's sense of humor is funny as hell, and I adore how you portrayed Haku, and Zabuza is one crazy bastard. This is up there with gunmetal for me. I am so happy those two became friends-liked the marriage proposal.
Favorite quote XD
It figured that the only woman he could stand was a transvestite. XD
This was wonderful :)
| UchihaNaruTeme4 11/27/12 . chapter 1
"Who are you and what'd you do with Neji's corpse?"
"Go away Neji. What happened to the old you damnit?"
Lol Nice lines, epic lemon-drowns in nosebleed-Loving the possessiveness.
The very manly Seme, and VERY manly Uke. Might I add, how much I adore their manliness you always expertly exhibit? Okay well I did now. There is always an undercurrent to your style, I especially love the madness.
You make them equals, and dear lord do your Sasuke's love the-HELL-out of your Naruto's. Yum.
This was very long, a bit longer that gunmetal I think? I was worried for a bit in the first half because I really didn't want to see Naruto do it with Sasuke-as a minor-because really, five years age difference is a very big difference for those under 18. Now, because of that, I gained mad respect for Naruto controlling himself so well and handling his responsibility to Sasuke to allow him into adulthood before giving him love that he needed an adult mind to handle. Those little snippets of the past as Sasuke aged were both heart breaking and heart warming. I want to take a kitchen table steak knife and toss it in Fugaku and Itachi's general direction in most of your stories-good thing ya know-its hard to make me hate them-but I thing you capture them, always do, and I love each part of their soul you enhance or change. Can't believe how Itachi left him for five hours ignoring him like that-ROAR-but than a kind blonde angel comes from the darkness takes his hadn't and leads him away to a never ending rapt-Its no wonder Sasuke fell in love with him, to be the only one who cares, he replaced the role of the brother. And that scene with the suicide note was intense. These two were made for each other. and if you ever read this, can you please explain when Naruto got hit by Samehada?-it seemed very traumatizing-and I would just like to hear the back story on it. XD Neji was amusing, was it all an act? Has Neji been so silly inside all along?-there are hints in the anime that Neji actually has a sense of humor-gasp-he does. And I like how you played it up. So, all in all, it was great, I'm probably going to read the epilogue. and more thing, I loved the first 'I love You.'
On that note...
-Off to the epilogue than to more story stalking! Yosh.
| Lareka 11/24/12 . chapter 2
I think I just had a heartattack myself...lol
| Lady Spain 11/22/12 . chapter 2
God, u gave me heart attack! I was shocked! I thought Naruto die :'(
Great job, dude!
| LovegoodH 11/16/12 . chapter 2
aww i knew you wouldnt do this to me! i mean, killing naruto and shit that would have killed me so god bless you and your whole life honey
amazing story with a lemons like really love you
| yoli ravioli 11/3/12 . chapter 2
Epic chapter dude! I cried when the plane crashed/blew up but happy that Naru and Sasu are back together...epic...