 justcallme-b-e-u-tiful 3/31/10 . chapter 17omg you have to add a squeal to this story i love it so much |
 HyperKirbyinc 12/14/09 . chapter 17I think you should make a sequal.
-Poof Rocks |
 TweenisodeOrange 11/7/09 . chapter 17"you had that the entire time and you're using it just now!" "I know, isn't it awesome?" LOL
A sequal would be really cool. |
 Luiz4200 11/5/09 . chapter 17Great ending. And I'm interested on the sequel. |
 Linzerj 11/5/09 . chapter 17COOLNESS! I LOVE IT! |
 Child at Heart Forever 11/4/09 . chapter 17Sequel! Sequel! I'm dying to see what happens afterward! Didn't it have something to do with cloning of the worlds? Yeah...but I'm still trying to figure out who the special toon was- but I can kinda think that its the same one Spongebob saw.
Anyway, It's been great to read this again, and I look forward to seeing more for you! |
 Skullgal94 11/4/09 . chapter 17Wow, great ending, I hope there is a sequel to this. Great job!:) |
 Linzerj 10/25/09 . chapter 16COOLNESS! What happens next? |
 TweenisodeOrange 10/24/09 . chapter 16Ok, fist of all there are some grammer errors I've got to point out:
"So this is where they TOOK SpongeBob." Timmy realized.
and
"Well, if our animatic negatives can solve it, so can WE. Let's go."
Those errors were just too big for me to look over. But other than that the story is developing wonderfully! |
 Luiz4200 10/23/09 . chapter 16Please update. It's just a guess but, is Anti-Cosmo the force that pulled back the negatives? |
 Skullgal94 10/23/09 . chapter 16Great, SpongeBob's been rescued. but I wonder what he,Danny and Timmy see? Great job and good luck!:) |
 TweenisodeOrange 10/13/09 . chapter 15Dramatic tension chapter! Woohoo! |
 Luiz4200 10/11/09 . chapter 15Poor SpongeBob. And the talk between Cosmo and Timmy was so in character. |
 Linzerj 10/11/09 . chapter 15SPONGEBOB! Wait, why do I care? Oh, yeah, cuz he's funny! So...*ahem*...SPONGEBOB! |
 Linzerj 10/11/09 . chapter 14NEAT! You put in the fact that Butch Hartman actually almost had them be cousins in his shows! But he didn't... And if you didn't know that, now you do! |