XD duckbutt! i like it i like it lol

That's a seriously cruel fate you made for Yura. A real ninja cruelty. Thumbs up.

very funny and... well just cool

Make sense...Kirigakure's history IS awfully fuzzy.

I like your theory that the birth of Kisame was caused by Madara. Darn...I dunno whether I should love this person for creating Kisame (which is my current Naruto sweetheart) or hate him. That little bastard...

One thing about Akatsuki: me and my friend speculated and decided that Akatsuki was created by Nagato. I'm not really sure, though, I'm still skeptic about who creates it. But I use Nagato as founder when I write my stories. It is obvious that Zetsu and Kakuzu are the first recruits since they are old enough (though there's no record on Zetsu's age)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Interesting story please update soon =)

Maddiekins and Duckbutt? -_-;

That was a very weird way to get your mental damage, man... In my Akatsuki story lineage, I also make Tobi's stupidity and goofiness as a result of a mental damage.
OK, ONWARD!

This is a very intresting and humorus story. I think you put it under the perfect title of a humor/adventure story because it is exactly that.

Lol the duck thing was funny. Please keep updating this story.

:D
That was really FUNNY.
I found myself laughing non-stop through the whole chapter.
(With other people giving me weird looks)

more PLEASE!

Yeah, this was sort of crap. But parodies can usually get way with that sort of thing and given that it's well written in regards to grammar, I don't feel bad about myself when I laugh. Although, I must insist that you include the Mighty Summon Ducks in future episodes. Anywho, keep on updating.

I did burn the image in unfortunately, but I added a pimp cane, Konan in a miniskirt, bikini top, and hooker boots on his arm, and Tobi asking Tsunade "Is Tobi gonna have to choke a **?". And now I think I'm going to see about having myself committed.