 darkoakpaw 2009-08-06 . chapter 7 i noticed youwere refering to the one fanfic where the twin's sister comes to superjial for a visit. Sadly, that fanfic has been deleted for some reason. :c
anyways, that was amazing! great work!! |
 Kittin 2009-04-14 . chapter 7 Well, unfortunetly my email account was hacked, so i don't have one, but as soon as i do, i'll post it. EPIC! lol, awesome epilogue it was perfect! You're a wonderful and inspiring wirter! Great job on the fanfic!
~kittin~ |
 Bathories Slave Kuri 2009-04-14 . chapter 7Ahahaha~! |
 Kittin 2009-04-11 . chapter 7 Oops! I didn't realize that I hadn't left a reply adress! Sorry! um... well, let's see. I didn't have anything perticular, (I'm no good at writing anything as long *or awesome* as you're fanfic, all of mine are very short.) But how about something with more of the Superjail charicters in it. (like when I read this, the only question I had was "What the heck is going on in the rest of superjail?" I guess the warden wasn't actually out of superjail, though, so nothing too big would happen... rite? Well, that would be interisting anyway.) Umm... like I said, I'm no good at writing long stories, but an idea did come to me one day after reading a chaper of your story, I don't know if it'll be of any intrest to you, but i'll give it anyway.
'The warden is all, like, IN SUPERJAIL! amazing rite? only not as the warden this time, this time, as a criminal. Yes, he still looks like the warden (in an orange jumpsuit without his hat and cane) Alice and Jarad are still there, but they don't remember him. Actually, there's a new warden! Well, as far as Alice, Jarad, a strange human-robot thing (that basically takes the roll of Jailbot, but isn't), and all of the inmates think, the current warden has always been the warden. The twins are the only ones who know that the warden is actually the warden, and that the current warden is not! But they wouldn't dare challenge the new warden. The new warden looks like the warden, but his outfit is black, and he has a much darker, much more macabre, much more... well, he's more insane, but he's less... childish? than the actual warden. He's really smart and really cunning... the warden knows who he himself is, and that the new warden, isn't the actual warden.'
It's kind of a long idea, but it sounded fun to me... I already tried to write this, but I couldn't, so I didn't. Well, that's about it! Though anything you write is be awesome I'm sure! ^^ hope that this was inspiring, but it's completely alright if it wasn't. Well, I still hope that you write another Superjail fanfic, and very good job, again, on "Lust for Freedom"!
~Kittin~
Oh! um... I guess my reply adress would be: |
 Gooooone 2009-04-11 . chapter 7So, I get this email
and freaked out, and I was like
"FINALLY"
but no
just
some stuff
about Kitten
fine
T_T
lol, kidding |
 Kittin 2009-04-10 . chapter 6 wow... THAT WAS SO AMAZING! lol, it was awesome and fun and simply amazing! It's sad that the story ended, though. May I request another Superjail fanfic? lol, very, very awesome.
~Kittin~ |
 Bathories Slave Kuri 2009-04-10 . chapter 6*sniker* A chorus of angels with bronchitis. 8D Lovely. What a finale this was! Lots of excitment! Loved the midget guerilla warfare! Priceless! Absolutely pricless. *wipes away tear* I hope to read more from you later on!
BSK |
 Gooooone 2009-04-10 . chapter 5You know, I hit submit before I was done with the review on chapter 6.. but I had forgotten to review chapter 5, sorry about that ^^;;
Anyways...
I'm sorry to see the story ended, but it was very good! I loved it! It was amazing, write something else soon!! =]] |
 Gooooone 2009-04-10 . chapter 6I can't believe it's over! It was soo good! I'm amazed
But I still have questions
like, Did the Warden know those guys were down there? And if so, why didn't he actually use them to work around Superjail? What was with the |
 Bathories Slave Kuri 2009-04-08 . chapter 5Brilliant. Lovely. Dark, and utterly compelling. I wonder how the Warden will get himself out of THIS mess. ;) Love how you accurately portray the Warden as well. |
 Kittin 2009-04-08 . chapter 5 I rather like the new charicters that you've set up, the little people. This is VERY suspencefull and VERY good! keep it up!
~Kittin~ |
 Kittin 2009-04-05 . chapter 4 Very good! I'm simply sucked in by each of these chapters, and the events of this one were unexpcted as is! Exelent!
~Kittin~ |
 Gooooone 2009-04-05 . chapter 4Wow.
That was amazing. That little twist was so dark.. I loved it! The Warden is so evil, but so ignorant as well! It's perfect! He doesn't even realize he's done anything wrong.
It's evil
and dark
and absolutely perfect. Even though you've explained soo much, there are still questions I have.
o.. I can't wait for you to update!! |
 Esinololly 2009-03-26 . chapter 3You truly captured the likeness of the Warden in this one. I can totally see him have a full blown conversation with the light bulb in an intelligent manner and end up fighting with it...and I had to giggle insanely at the very end with the voice and having to clean up yet another voice...haha..is it just the janitor ** with him?
Either way, beautifully written as usual and you used the paragraph spaces to your advantage for sure to make certain things more dramatic. Loving this! |
 Gooooone 2009-03-24 . chapter 3O... Very interesting, and very hilarous with the live Cher performance! That would make me wail in pain too =//
Poor Warden. I hope we get to find out what he did soon! Or what he didn't do?
There's a lot of questions I have... |
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