Nice story, though it made me kinda sad, especially the part of his haircut. I never gotten over the fact he cut it so short. He looked so much better with long hair. But you wrote an awesome story. It really made me feel... weird, in a sad but good way, when I finished reading. Good job!

Excellence! Everyone was in-character and the second chapter was really funny. I wish I could see Shinji's new hairstyle though ;)

I liked seeing their aspect of their exile from Soul Society. Anyways I wonder what they did with their clothing from their Soul Society days? Please continue!

Ohayo!

I just loved ... I have read many fics about Shinji's haircut and this is one of the best 10/10

kisses

Maryeli

PS: I would like read more... please, continue...

:P

I loved these two fics.
I liked how everyone was in character and the fact that you included all the vizards...plus shinji/hiyori is awesome!
Nice work!

This was fantastic! Everyone was so perfectly in character and their interactions with each other were spot-on!

I've read several accounts of Shinji's big haircut but I think this may be my favorite. I loved Hiyori's role in the situation and her subtle jealousies toward Lisa (the latter being something I haven't seen anywhere else and find quite interesting!) but Shinji's own reaction to the butchered job was the highlight! ^_^

Thank you for an amazing read! Will there be more? *hopes*

This is really good. Nicely written. And I especially love the battle between Hiyori and her Hollow. Very interesting.

Please keep writing. :)

This is powerful. Reading Hiyori's POV in such a serious setting - her facing off against her hollow - is something I don't do often, so this was a really fun change for me. You write extremely well, whether describing the fight between Hiyori and her hollow, or the agony that she felt when she sliced open Shinji. I loved the subtle romance you put in here as well (or at least how Hiyori really cares about Shinji). Again, I LOVE this fic and think you should write more Vizard fics! :D

Wow that was good. I was wondering about her inner battle during the episode, and your version is definitely very real and well-written.

And yes, more of Vizards please! They are such a colourful bunch of characters who deserved more screen time (well, I watch the anime, just finished the past arc, so dunno what happens in the future)

What happened to them after they escaped to the real world? How did they deal with it? How did the people left behind in Soul Society deal with it (an adorable tiny Nanao-chan comes to mind, and her captain, too, of course)? What did they do in that 100 years? What made them leave Kisuke?

Wow. You capture characters well, so I hope that you're planning to write more! Looking forward to it!

Great story! Love your work

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It was greit :3 !
I like SHINJI *-* ! and Hiyori *-*!
just I love it :3

congratulation :3 ! XD bye !

Hm mm... Her inner hollow wears clothes that are almost like Ichigo's inner hollow.

But the personality is the same. Brutal,Arrogant and Sadistic.

She could be paired up with Ichigo.

Hey you are the one from the Masked Army group on lifejournal. Hurry now I can finally coment on it. Loved it great fic. The vizards do not get enough love!