I loved this book, the sexual tension between a vampire and a human-vampire was amazing! The detail was specific and thought over! However, you used the word 'exquisite' too much, in the future you could try other complicated and 'Edward-y' words, like 'perfect', 'grand', 'beautiful', 'amazing', or you could just lessen the 'exquisite' words down! But, overall this is a very enjoyable book with the right amount of sex in it. You used different varieties, and you made sure that not all of the list was complete, that left me and others hanging, wondering how they would happen. My personal favorite scene was when Edward was in leather as it is not something you'd imagine every day. I am impressed with this book and it went straight down into my favorites, bravo!

Chloe

This story is amazing, its my current favourite. You are a really talented writer!

I just started reading fanfic about three months ago. I know I'm late to the party! But I just had to say that this is my first review ever. I was blown away by the passion that you wrote into this! I'm not an overly emotional person, but I laughed and cried (and moaned ;)) through this fic. You are an extremely talented writer and I hope you are still at it. I will definitely be searching for more of your works. Thank you for sharing this!

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INTERESTING ;)

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Thank you. This was fun.

awesome start

wonderful!

Love!

I really really really like this story!

Amazing

everything was just lovely!

i don't know why she didn't think of this sooner. probably for the same reason i didn't, she just did not know any better. god knows i didn't do it until i was twent-five and i had two children!