Heyas. :-)
Not sure if you're the type of author who likes a well-rounded critique or not (I try to give them out when I can)... but here goes.
Now, I like all your chars (a lot - Dreamer, Skater, and the Golds, especially Wise, Ty, and Play amuse me). I like your stories; they're more interesting then the usual RR fare, IMO. What I don't care much for is the script-style formatting. I think it kinda takes away from the depth and emotions of the chars, so maybe you can try doing a more standard story format the next time you write? Also, something else I notice with script stories is that when you're working with more then ten chars, then all the chars come off as rather flat, unfortunately. As chillingly cool as it is to see a small army of heroes rushing into battle, I think it'd be better if you shuffled different teams around for different fics (the Golds in one fic, the Silvers in another, etc). Or, if you still wanna work with a lot of chars, somehow give them the same amount of screen time (again, this is why I think a standard style story would be better).
Hope you found my feedback helpful, and keep on writing.