does it really only have to be a one-shot? it's nice to see you writing again! i really liked this story (and your others) please, if you have it in you, add something *puppy dog eyes* unless... you have something better for us... great story. can't wait to read more of your stuff. and CONGRATS!

Fabulous! continue plez! I think some lemons would do nicely;)and congradulations on the engagement!

i loved it ;)

wow. i aboslutel ylove this story and i'm so very glad that you decided to pick up writing fanfiction again! i love the way you write and thanks a lot! i love this story!

i liked it! and MAN have i been totally WAITING and WAITING for you to write! more!

Twas nice but ya know...T rating isn't really your style. (;
You know you like it down and dirty, just like me!
Haha!
But I know this was for you to get back into it since you've been gone for a whole freaking year!
Which saddens me so much!
But PMASAP cause I missed hearing from you!

hehe i luv it

Aww, this short read was SUCH a pleasure after writing tedious essays for two hours. Well written, it actually had me smiling at the end, which is rather rare. Great job!!

Gosh...great characterization...I need to start washing some dirty dishes. =]

Grats on your wedding!! I loved this one even though there was no hanky panky :p You are amazing! XD

Very good my friend! I feel that you may have me beat. I need to finish mine now! lol! *standing O*