|Reviews for Ellies Story Chapter 2|
| Anonymous 6/14/09 . chapter 1
PLEASE take this off of Fanfic and put it on FicPress!
It has nothing to do with Sweethearts- yes, that is a different book.
Also, the writing is a bit bulky. Work on capitalization and commas and logical excitement.
| anonymous 5/20/09 . chapter 1
What does this have to do with the book, Sweethearts?