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Unfairness?
2009-11-24 . chapter 6
Maybe it's because I find OCs very annoying (mostly because they tend to be ego-feeding Self-Inserts). Or maybe it's because I don't get how bisexualism is perceived as being more realistic (statistically, it really isn't you know).

I just...don't like it. I've only read even this far because I liked one of your others. The elements are there, just in the wrong order for me - my irritation level is fairly high right now, in fact. So high that I'd be positively thrilled if all the unnecessaries died off.
TakiToki
2009-11-24 . chapter 6
oh c'mon~ it's getting really good!! (sulks) please do update soon! I really love your fanfics!! If you don't... I'm gonna cry till my eyes bleed boohoo~
Kairei
2009-10-12 . chapter 6
...If you don't continue this story, I will be very, very upset. I must admit that this is truly the best fanfiction story that I have ever read for this coupling. So please continue. Chikane and Himeko desserve a proper happy ending. Please don't be the cause of my suicide. XD

seriously, great work. I was only able to spot some minor spelling errors here and there.
norrin
2009-10-03 . chapter 6
Go on!! I see you've never left one of your stories unfinished so I hope you wont do that with this one. This fic is great. Update. Update. Update. Please!
Konata77
2009-09-24 . chapter 6
I love all of your stories! Please update soon!
MuseOfRock
2009-08-01 . chapter 6
Hey, I hope you are okay, wherever you are. I really wish for you to update this amazing story, one of the best so far that
I've read. And you realy left at an interesting moment.

Don't forget about you story please, and PMS!!
winkie
2009-07-09 . chapter 6
Meanie, you left the story when it was starting to get good!
When r u updating? I really liked it so far :-)
PMS
ritsuMonkey7
2009-06-30 . chapter 6
Squee! Nice chapter I hope you keep up the good work. For now I'll be waiting haha. ^^
eclipseX
2009-06-29 . chapter 6
outstanding chapter. the relationship between himeko and chikane is turning out to be interesting.
MissIzzyB
2009-06-29 . chapter 6
Lovely. Can't wait for the next update.
chkim218
2009-06-28 . chapter 6
good chapter! thanks for the quick update. i'm very happy that their relationship progressed and now they are friends and calling eachother by their 1st names. awesome!! very funny about reiko and korona.

anyway, can'e wait for the next chapter!
LunarMiko07
2009-06-28 . chapter 6
Yay they're are finally friends! I love Chikane's and Himeko's interactions here.
MuseOfRock
2009-06-28 . chapter 6
Nice… You know I’m so happy right now. I like the beginning, it showed how Chikane it’s going to really struggle to adapt to a more open minded society. It also shows how much it’s going to cost her to realized and embrace any feelings she may have later for the blue eyed girl. I enjoyed the dynamic that Himeko has with Makoto, and Chikane with the loveable Ryo. That boy gets more interesting by the second. And the bagel bit, OMG, hilarious. Also, Chikane’s roommate could not be more suitable to her. They’re complete opposite, that was a nice touch at the story.

Now about the bet, I love bets, so I was really giddy when I read about the bet. But who will win if instead of friendship it becomes the very thing we all reading this are hoping for. What will happen then XD, well, besides heartache and drama. In this episode things seemed to be moving forward a little bit, I mean, the feel weird and Chikane called her adorable.

And finally the Chikane-chan title made its appearance!! I was really hopping for this moment to come. Seriously XD. And you made the moment perfect and all the thoughts surrounding Chikane’s and Himeko’s head made it gracious. And the drawing thing, that is what I like the Himeko character so much. She really is a strong person, maybe it’s her innocence, but I like that she can do such thinks just out of the blue. Only her can really break through Chikane’s armor.

Anyway, another long review. PMS please. Bye-bye.
Ninnypants
2009-06-28 . chapter 6
gyahahaha i was wondering when the "chikane-chan" would come out XD
Avarenda
2009-06-28 . chapter 6
wow, well done. You developed this chapter masterfully. I really look forward to the next chapter, especially now that we're just starting to get into the meat of the story. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Part of me wonders if you have this all plotted out or if you're just writing as it comes. It seems more like you know where the story is going, but you never can tell with some people. in any case, good chapter, look forward to more.
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