"mum dragged you to your room. Put you in bed, when she started to take off your trousers you yelled ‘NO, NO, PLEASE LEAVE ME ALONE! I’M MARRIED!"

Jajaja! Buenísimo. ¿Sabes? No soy gran fan de los drabbles o los fics demasiado cortos... ¡pero tu fic estuvo buenísimo! Excelente frase la del final. Me encantó la descripción de Pan acerca de como quedó todo luego de que Gohan llegara en tales condiciones jaja, muy natural... ¡así me la imagino!. Muchas gracias por la mini historia, ¡faltan tantos fanfictions buenos por aquí! que ud da una sensación de aire fresco.

Saludos Nor!! :D

great story i loved it and i think it was really cute

lol at "NO NO PLEASE I'M MARRIED!" part

Oddly different from your usual work. One day I'm going to sit here and see if I can actually type 10 words...that's like...4 pages of a written essay. Well ok, 250 is my average paragraph, so maybe about 2 pages. But still, it's a lot. Why am I getting off topic, and how did I NOT see this? Oh well...late to the party as usual. ^^

This is so funny, haha!

Very nice and extremely well written ^_^

Heh. That was a cute and funny little quickie. Nice punchline. :)

~TheHolyDarkness Out~

The last line made me laugh XD loved it so much. Good luck with this months comp.

Words cannot describe how hilarious this is. Honestly, couldn't stop laughing. Very, very, VERY well done XD

lol. this story has a funny ending. good job!

OMG...I just love this fic. I first read it on the deviant art sweetest irony contest and i loved it.It's really good.

Haha, yeah, that'd be enough to please most any wife, methinks. I love the idea, it's genuinely sweet and simple, my favorite kind! ^_^ I think I remember from somewhere that English isn't your first language? That explains a couple of simple mistakes in grammar, nothing to really be worried about. All in all, a great story, good luck with the competition, and thanks for your review!

~illegiblewriter

Hey, loved this story. It was so cute! Thanks for the e-mail, it's definitely one my favorites! Keep it up!

I love it! That's such a great idea for the theme :D

I told you Nor! Every one liked it!

:D:D:D:D

HAHAHAHA! OMG, you rule, Nor! ^_~
I knew it was yours again! lolol~

Lovely