I agree with Deltaquadangel in the assessment of this little story. Right on the mark with characterizations for both Seven and B'Elanna. The fact that you *didn't* have them fly at each other right there in the Jefferies tube proves it beyond a doubt.

Very well done.

It's refreshing to see a writer who knows the characters and how they behave and what they would say. Your Torres and 7of9 are true to character. What you have them saying and how they react is so true to form. I recently found this site and must say, the majority of the stories about Torres and 7of9 are so off the mark, poorly written and juvenile, I almost gave up reading stories by the other authors. This story and a handfull by a very few other authors, make me keep up hope for more quality Torres and 7of9 stories.

The poem was moving and strangely beautiful (although it was about the thin line between love/hate). The growing frustration of B'Elanna with trying to explain things to Seven was funny as well. All in all, good work.

Yay for the uncannon couple! And the Klingon poetry was great

wow that was really really good! it was really well written, and kinda sweet. i mean its still a bit strange imagining B Elanna and Seven, but its interesting how the whole story line works out! cool!

Nice one! *applauds* Very nice! :-) 5 stars!