 Sir Thames 2009-10-24 . chapter 16Good work here, mate. Carry on. |
 Screaming Dean 2009-10-22 . chapter 16I'm happy to see you're doing so well. Keep up the good work. |
 Radio Driver 2009-10-22 . chapter 16Good goin, guys. Keep on keepin on. |
 Emma Iveli 2009-10-21 . chapter 16That was a great cliffhanger you added, good job! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
 Radio Driver 2009-10-16 . chapter 15Good goin, guys. Keep on keepin on. |
 Sir Thames 2009-10-10 . chapter 15A well written chapter. Spot on. |
 Screaming Dean 2009-10-09 . chapter 15I'm glad you're still writing this. Keep up the good work. |
 Emma Iveli 2009-10-09 . chapter 15Okay... that was a cool chapter... really cool. Good job.
Also I'll get to the next chapter tommarrow. |
 Radio Driver 2009-08-11 . chapter 14Good goin, guys. Keep on keepin on. |
 Screaming Dean 2009-08-07 . chapter 14I'm happy to see you're doing so well. Keep up the good work. |
 Emma Iveli 2009-08-06 . chapter 14That was a good chapter I liked the extended ending... and the twist about where the Rainbow Crystals are... can't wait for the next one. |
 Sir Thames 2009-08-05 . chapter 13You two work well together. Carry on. |
 Radio Driver 2009-08-01 . chapter 13Good goin, guys. Keep on keepin on. |
 Screaming Dean 2009-07-30 . chapter 13I'm glad you're keeping this going. Keep up the good work. |
 Emma Iveli 2009-07-30 . chapter 13That was a pretty good chapter... Good job. |