This is such a well written, descriptive story! The picture was amazing, and this story just enhanced it! I read it with the picture on another page, and it was so incredible! I loved the little romantic part at the end; a great way to finish the story

3Tay

Nijuuni rocks

but this fic too

great job at writing this!

Oh yes, I enjoyed this very much. I'm amazed that you could write a story by just looking at that fanart. Thumbs up!

aw the ending was sweet.

Ah, yes! That picture is amazing indeed. Never thought that you would be able to write a story about it. I especially liked the part wherein the Archer (Kainé, right?) climbs up the hill.

As amazing as Nijuuni is, you are too, because this one-shot was truly genious.

I really liked your story. I think you actually did a really good job of interpreting the drawing. The story is definitely more creative then anything I would have made up to go with it. Nijuuni's art really is great, isn't it? The Akuroku fandom, and even the KH fandom in general, is truly lucky to have such a talented fanartist in our midst. And then we also have people like you who strive to give us such great work in story form. Yay! Love to you for the story. Bye.

Kainé's a really good name.

The descriptions are good, but I don't quite understand the story... Maybe it's one of those where you have to read it a couple times before it makes sense. But I strangely like it. Strangely because I don't usually go for the 'bloody violence' ones.